Thursday, April 11, 2013

solitude



solitude
sage et nécessaire
être bien pour l'amour
vrais moments
nécessaire et sage
amour pour le bien-être
solitude

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solitude
wise and necessary
being well for love
true moments
necessary and wise
love for well-being
solitude


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22 comments:

  1. I'm glad you posted again...I so enjoyed your offering here and in two languages at that. Beautifully done...love your wise words in this. Thank you joining in today.

    Gayle ~

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    1. Thank you Gayle. Your challenge was a TOUGH one!

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  2. nice...true moments centers this well...love for well being is def necessary and wise....

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    1. True moments
      Moments of truth
      Can both sustain the meaning I think. Great poem you did, being palindromes by line. WOW!

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  3. I like the wisdom of solitude ~ Good work on the form ~

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    1. We all need a bit of solitude, right Grace?

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  4. solitude is so important and leads us back to the center again..your message fits well with the form

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    1. How apt then, to use this form for solitude. Thanks Claudia!

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  5. Solitude recharges my batteries so I can love when I'm in company again. Nice write.

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    1. Recharging is an excellent way to describe solitude, Rowan. Thanks!

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  6. strong use of the form. a lovely example of perfect word placement.

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    1. Heidi, that is so generous of you.

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  7. Interesting double palindrome
    Sandwiching "true moments".
    I did not know that "sage" was wise in French -- but I have only studied a little.
    Let me take a try using your form (about you):


    Femme
    gentil et sage
    ¡ écrit !
    sage et gentil
    Femme

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    1. Merci beaucoup, mon ami. Quel honneur!

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  8. It is nice when we feel comfortable in solitude...

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    1. Yes Laurie. To be comfortable in our own skin. In our own place. In our own time.

      That is wealth.

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  9. i guess this poetry works with different languages too... thanks for the twist

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  10. I love the feeling of reading this. Solitude is necessary, ironically, for love. Wonderful.

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    1. Lila,
      I visited your site and what a delight it was. Thank you for being here. And yes, solitude is necessary. It's when we recharge...

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