solitude
solitude
sage et nécessaire
être bien pour l'amour
vrais moments
nécessaire et sage
amour pour le bien-être
solitude
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solitude
wise and necessary
being well for love
true moments
necessary and wise
love for well-being
solitude
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I'm glad you posted again...I so enjoyed your offering here and in two languages at that. Beautifully done...love your wise words in this. Thank you joining in today.
ReplyDeleteGayle ~
Thank you Gayle. Your challenge was a TOUGH one!
Deletenice...true moments centers this well...love for well being is def necessary and wise....
ReplyDeleteTrue moments
DeleteMoments of truth
Can both sustain the meaning I think. Great poem you did, being palindromes by line. WOW!
I like the wisdom of solitude ~ Good work on the form ~
ReplyDeleteWe all need a bit of solitude, right Grace?
Deletesolitude is so important and leads us back to the center again..your message fits well with the form
ReplyDeleteHow apt then, to use this form for solitude. Thanks Claudia!
DeleteSolitude recharges my batteries so I can love when I'm in company again. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteRecharging is an excellent way to describe solitude, Rowan. Thanks!
Deletestrong use of the form. a lovely example of perfect word placement.
ReplyDeleteHeidi, that is so generous of you.
Deletelovely..very profound!
ReplyDeleteIndeed? Thank you Akila!
DeleteInteresting double palindrome
ReplyDeleteSandwiching "true moments".
I did not know that "sage" was wise in French -- but I have only studied a little.
Let me take a try using your form (about you):
Femme
gentil et sage
¡ écrit !
sage et gentil
Femme
Merci beaucoup, mon ami. Quel honneur!
DeleteIt is nice when we feel comfortable in solitude...
ReplyDeleteYes Laurie. To be comfortable in our own skin. In our own place. In our own time.
DeleteThat is wealth.
i guess this poetry works with different languages too... thanks for the twist
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it.
DeleteI love the feeling of reading this. Solitude is necessary, ironically, for love. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteLila,
DeleteI visited your site and what a delight it was. Thank you for being here. And yes, solitude is necessary. It's when we recharge...